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Dragged to the frozen
floor
Severed from a
false fairyland
Knives plunging
into vulnerability
Realization
Delicate delusion
wrenched apart
Sharp slivers of
poisoned innocence
scoring through tender
flesh
Tripping
Tumbling forth
Gasping for
air
Millions of
furious feet
Pounding over
a broken
body
Crushed to a
pulp
Filth
What you thought it was
was all a
goddamn lie
Grow up
Learn to face it
Because no one will
be there for you
If you die
no one will care
When you cry
you're just burning away
your mask
Didn't know life was
like this?
Well, kid
too bad
It's always been this way
And it always will be
floor
Severed from a
false fairyland
Knives plunging
into vulnerability
Realization
Delicate delusion
wrenched apart
Sharp slivers of
poisoned innocence
scoring through tender
flesh
Tripping
Tumbling forth
Gasping for
air
Millions of
furious feet
Pounding over
a broken
body
Crushed to a
pulp
Filth
What you thought it was
was all a
goddamn lie
Grow up
Learn to face it
Because no one will
be there for you
If you die
no one will care
When you cry
you're just burning away
your mask
Didn't know life was
like this?
Well, kid
too bad
It's always been this way
And it always will be
Last stanza was something I wanted to try. >.> The "poem" technically ended the stanza before that, but I wanted to add something new. Did it turn out well?
Damn, I feel like I'm repeating myself with these poems. >.> I'm not even doing anything new anymore, it feels like.
- (c) AcidLegacy
Damn, I feel like I'm repeating myself with these poems. >.> I'm not even doing anything new anymore, it feels like.
- (c) AcidLegacy
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I love it! : D
The way you put it, you can just picture everything, and that just makes it even better. And don't worry if your repeating with poems, I tend to do that too. When you repeat you can express it differently each time. Which just makes it even better :3
The way you put it, you can just picture everything, and that just makes it even better. And don't worry if your repeating with poems, I tend to do that too. When you repeat you can express it differently each time. Which just makes it even better :3